Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 31
>> Tuesday, April 14, 2009
Jondak grinned widely as he picked up his weapons. Tim wondered why Shirra didn't just outright kill him, rather than have Jondak fight him.
But she stood there, watching serenely, and Tim understood. She wanted him to suffer, but by Jondak's hand so she could witness it. She wanted entertainment, or perhaps it was a reward for all of Jondak's hard work.
Whatever the reason, Tim didn't have much time to dwell on it, because Jondak closed the distance quickly, both weapons raised high above his head. His face was pulled back in a bloodthirsty grimace, as he struck out at Tim.
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Ileeya struggled with the invisible bonds, but she was held fast. She had a glimpse inside her sister's head. She was looking through Shirra's memories as she talked, trying to find a weakness she could take advantage of. She had been unprepared for her sister's sudden movement, and consequently, was now stuck.
She tried to concentrate on freeing herself, but an abrupt cry from Tim brought her back to reality. Instead, she decided to do what she could to help him through this battle, because, truth be told, Jondak was a superior fighter. Tim was in danger.
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Remember your lessons, Tim. Suddenly hearing Ileeya's voice inside his head almost made him falter, but he managed to keep his pace. Never strike out of haste. Watch your opponent carefully. Never take your eyes off your him, not even for a second. Look for the right time. And above all else, think!
Jondak was a whirlwind of motion. His arms were pinwheeling so fast, delivering blow upon blow, Tim wasn't sure how he could study him. He realized that even by now, barely three minutes into the battle, he should have been dead. Jondak had already hit him more than a dozen times. But Tim had suffered barely more than a scratch.
Then he noticed the macabre glint in Jondak's eyes. Jondak was only hitting with the flats of his blades, rather than the points. He was toying with him. Like a cat tortures a mouse before finally ending its suffering and killing it. Was he doing this for intimidation? Or just sick pleasure? Whatever the reason, Tim tried to brace himself for when the real attacks came.
Tim managed to score a hit on Jondak's left arm. A fairly good one, right above the elbow. It slowed Jondak's attacks with that arm and gave Tim a little more time to watch and defend himself. But not much, because the blow also took the twisted smile off Jondak's face and replaced it with one of hatred.
Jondak yelled, and brought his right blade in a full sweep across Tim's face. He immediately struck again with his left, turned full circle and struck with his right again before Tim even had a chance to react. Jondak's precision aim was alarming, he had struck all three blows on Tim's right cheek. He felt his skin rip painfully as the blades tore through it, and the gashes immediately started bleeding. Tim forced himself to stand his ground and not give in to the pain, because Jondak would surely take advantage of the opening.
And then suddenly, he felt a swirling coolness covering his brain. He felt relaxed and comforted, and knew without looking at her, that Ileeya had caused it. The coolness traveled down his neck and into his shoulders, and slowly made its way down his arms.
Now his arms felt relaxed but alert, full of power, speed, and confidence. He struck quickly at Jondak, catching him off guard, and raking his sword across Jondak's chest. The Irnaxxian glared at him. Brace yourself, Tim, the worst is yet to come.
Jondak sliced with his right hand, turned his body full circle, and stabbed with his injured left. The stab was weak, and Tim dodged it, but the slice caught him in the stomach. He grunted from the pain, but forced himself to remain alert.
The tempo of the fight increased. The force of Jondak's blows pushed Tim backward. The blows were mostly blocked by Tim's sword, but they were agressive, and Tim had difficulty planting his feet against them. Jondak was striking to kill now.
In his mind's eye, Tim saw himself and Ileeya lying in a meadow full of flowers. He was happy, because he knew there was no danger, just the two of them, free to show their love for each other with nothing standing in their way. No prison, no tournaments, no Jondak or Shirra. He gazed into her beautiful eyes, so full of passion and devotion...
The image calmed him even more, and he felt his sword arm strike almost of its own accord. Jondak grunted, and Tim suddenly realized that he could do this. This was not an impossible task. He had to do this. He put all of his fears of Jondak aside and concentrated on the image. He could have that. He must have that. You need to protect her.
Then Tim saw another image. It was the image of Jondak pushing Ileeya up against the wall with a knife to her throat. She was afraid, pleading. Jondak smiled cruelly at her. Tim could even hear the fabric of her dress tearing as Jondak forced himself on her.
But the image did not frighten him. It angered him, greatly. He struck out at Jondak, struck out for blood. He attacked just as aggressively as the Irnaxxian had at him.
The sudden shift in Tim's demeanor surprised Jondak, and he stumbled backward slightly at the force of the blow. Clearly he hadn't expected that Tim was capable of such ferocity.
Tim hit again, and again, channeling all the anger and hatred he had suffered in the past several months at Jondak. He had shifted from defender to aggresor, and came upon Jondak with a renewed sense of self preservation, but one that stemmed from anger rather than fear.
Jondak recovered quickly, though, and anticipated Tim's attacks, changing his strategy as well. Now he used his short swords to both block and attack. He didn't score nearly as many hits this way, though, and Tim landed a hard hit on Jondak's left shoulder. It was the same arm he had wounded before, and now it was completely out of commission. Jondak attempted to raise it to block, but failed.
Tim showed no mercy as he brought his sword into Jondak's neck. The wound gaped, and a spatter of blood splashed on Tim's face. Jondak howled, and there was fear in his eyes. Tim fed off the fear, and brought his sword down on Jondak again before the Irnaxxian had time to recover. This one cleaved into his left arm just above the elbow, slicing through mucles and tendons.
Jondak was breathing heavy now, blatant fear showing on his face. Tim's own face was wet with a spatter of Jondak's blood, and he showed nothing but a lust to see Jondak's life come to an end.
"Tim," Jondak said between pants. "I'll make you a deal. Let me live and I'll forget about Ileeya. You can have her fair and square, and I'll not bother you anymore."
Don't listen to him, Tim! He's lying!
Tim didn't need to hear Ileeya's voice to know this. There was no way he would ever trust Jondak. He was running scared, now. He knew Tim had the advantage. With a sneer on his face, he rammed his sword through Jondak's chest, watching with a sick fascination as it pierced through skin, organs, and clothing and emerged from the other side coated in the Irnaxxian's blood.
He stepped in close to Jondak, who was now wheezing his last breaths. "I don't make deals with bastards," Tim growled, and with as much force as he shoved it in, he jerked the bloody weapon back out. Jondak swayed on his feet a moment before falling backward, dead.
Tim turned to Shirra, glowering, still fueled with a heavy bloodlust. "I have killed your henchman. You're next."
Shirra's high pitched laugter echoed around the chamber. The sound caused the hair on his arms to stand on end. Such a wicked sound.
"Congratulations, Tim. What do you want, a medal? I was going to kill him anyway, you know. I just wanted a little entertainment, first. I truly thought he would win. But you surprised me. Now, more than ever, I regret the fact you turned your back on me, because we could have really been something together. But sadly, I'm going to have to kill you both."
Tim approached her, sword raised. Shirra looked at him casually, before abruptly raising her hand at him. Tim suffered an electrical jolt up the length of both arms, causing them to jerk backward and his hands to open, releasing the sword. The sword slid several feet away, out of reach. He collapsed to the cool stone floor to catch his breath.
"Now that's enough," Shirra said quietly. "Do you really think it's going to be that easy to kill me? Do you really think I am the same weak coward Jondak was? You should know better by now, Tim."
"Shirra! Release me," Ileeya yelled at her. This is not about Tim. It's between you and me."
"Release you? Why, that would be rather foolish, don't you think?"
"If you don't release me, than you are a coward."
Shirra's eyes clouded over with hate for a moment, but then she raised her arm and Ileeya could move freely again.
"Alright then," Shirra purred. "It's time to finish this. But do not think there is a chance that I will spare you again. And realize that as soon as I'm done with you, Tim will be killed as well."
Ileeya said nothing. She closed her eyes for a second, and caused Shirra to fly backward, falling over the bench that was behind her. Shirra got up and brushed herself off, smiling.
"Impressive. Did you learn that just today? Is that all you're capable of? Or can you do more?"
Ileeya closed her eyes again, and this time sent a heavy sculpture flying at Shirra's head.
Shirra simply turned and threw her hand out, shattering it to pieces, the small pebbles bouncing along the stone floor and landing at her feet .
"I'm afraid you'll have to do better than that, dear. How about trying this?" She twirled her hand in the air. "ldajocvod!" Ileeya suddenly clutched her throat, gasping for breath. She staggered, then fell to her knees as she fought the constriction.
"NO!" Tim yelled and rushed at Shirra. Shirra turned and scowled at Tim. She raised her hand and suddenly Tim found himself in a cage with thick metal bars. He grabbed at them and shook them, but they were solid.
To be continued...
7 comments:
Whoa!
A truly remarkable chapter Ariana!
The pictures were all perfect - I really don't know how you manage to get your sims to move in the ways you want - must take an awfully long time!
The story has become really intense and I cannot wait to find out the fate of your characters.
The writing was superb as well. I have read fight scenes before which fail to have the desired effect, but yours were truly brilliant! :D
Epic battle with totaly awsome shots! niely done! oh, poor Jondak... not *grin* Tim has found a very powerfull moment there, and the adrenaline got him cocky and attacking Shira. nice try though LOL
can't wait to see how ileeya gets out of this one!
Hi, Sam!
Wow! Thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed the fight scene.
And oh yes - sometimes it's very hard to get the sims to do what I want. I have hacked paintings to make them perform many different actions, but there are hundreds of animations to choose from. That's great, until you try to remember where a certain animation is located and have to spend a lot of time thumbing through the options until you find it - if you manage to find it, lol. And at this point, my game was moving very slow.
So...borderline torturous is what I would call it, which is why it took me SO long to get through these last chapters. Not to mention the burnout I was suffering with it, too.
I'm really happy you're reading, Sam! More to come! It's almost over.
Hi, QG!
I'm glad you liked it! The story has been building up to this battle for quite a long time, and finally, Tim gets to exact revenge for everything Jondak has done. But, he was so fueled by bloodlust, he kind of forgot that Shirra was ultra powerful. Nice one, Tim!
Thanks for the compliments!
Great battle, wonderfully described and the shots, amazing. Tim has turned out to be quite the hero, great job Ariana!
My hat goes off to your patience in setting up some of those astounding shots!
..."I don't make deals with bastards!" LUV IT. <3AureliaB
Oops! I forgot to leave my comment, and I see you've added another episode!
This chapter was outstanding! Your writing was very well done. I love a good sword fight! And it was amazing how you could get the sims to pose like that. Good work!
Things are really starting to heat up now. The girls are going to go at it now. I hope Ileeya gives her sister the good walloping she deserves!
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