Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 2
>> Tuesday, January 22, 2008
Tim surveyed his new surroundings. It looked like he would imagine Hell to look. It was red all around, and a sulfurous smell lingered in the air. Black tarry puddles were scattered here and there, with slowly churning liquid. Not water, but a thick, tar-like substance.
One of the puddles was churning more than the others. Tim jumped back as something abruptly broke the liquid's surface.
To say the beast was hideous would be an understatement. Tim watched, rooted to his spot, as the creature continued to lift itself out of the pool.
It scowled at him. Tim felt icy shivers all along his spine, and tried to fight his terror.
The demon closed his eyes as if he were concentrating. This couldn't be good.
He only got a few steps when an agonizing pain sliced through his brain. It was so intense it sent spots before his eyes. He fell to his knees as the world started slipping away.
The last thing he saw before he blacked out was the demon's face leering over him.
When he woke up, he was sitting in a chair surrounded by odd looking people. No, not people! he thought panickingly. His heart beat spastically in his chest, thumping hard against his ribs. They were...creatures! Nothing like he had ever seen before.
He was violently jerked out of his chair and his wrists were pinned behind his back. He was aware of one of these...persons standing behind him, claws scraping against his skin. It took the majority of Tim's strength to not scream and fight in a mad frenzy. He was outnumbered here, being combative would only make things worse.
The two figures he could see without turning his head, which he dared not do, bowed low to the ground.
A moment later, another being entered the room. He was elegantly dressed, and held a regal disposition, surveying the bowing figures in front of him. Tim surmised that he could only be the ruler of this place.Tim was roughly forced to his knees.
The king stared silently at Tim for a moment before the creatures rose. One of them approached the throne. Tim was pulled back up to his feet. He didn't know how long he could stand there before he passed out. The fog had finally lifted from his brain, but its departure left him feeling weak and dizzy.
The creature had a heated discussion with the king, all the while glancing in Tim's direction. The language was harsh and gutteral, made up of sounds that came from deep within the throat.
Tim was abruptly wheeled around and pushed toward a set of double doors that led out of the throne room. The creature walked quickly, and Tim had to walk fast in order to not be pushed down in front of it. When he stumbled once, he felt the creature's grip on his wrists tighten. Its claws dug into his arm as it lifted him slightly to keep him from falling. Tim could have sworn he felt the bones in his wrists cracking.
Finally, it stopped in front of a door. The creature fumbled through a ring of keys and opened it. Tim barely got a glance at the interior before he was shoved inside.
He lost his footing and tripped, landing on his face. The door slammed shut and he heard the sound of muffled laughter from the hall beyond.
He suddenly realized that he was exhausted. The abrupt arrival to...wherever and the demon...the strange people who were not at all human, all the forceful handling by the guard, and not to mention the full day of work he had put in before any of this even happened, took their toll.
Maybe I'll just lie here and die... he thought. Then realized that was ridiculous.
He felt soft hands gently rolling him over, while a voice as beautiful as the tinkling of tiny bells filled the air around him.
Finally! A human face! What a sight for sore eyes! And not just any human face - a delicately featured female face of unearthly beauty stared back at him. A cascade of thick silver-white hair fell over her slim shoulders and framed her lovely face. Large, soulful eyes, laced with concern, blinked at him. Lucious lips formed a slight smile as she looked down upon him. In fact, the more he thought about it, the more he realized that she wasn't human at all.
She was surely an angel, sent to carry him out of here. She tucked some of her lustrous hair behind her pointed ear...that's odd. She has pointed ears. Yep. Couldn't be human. Clearly the face of an angel. Clearly, he was hallucinating. What a way to go. He was ready. He gave his angel a weak smile before he passed out.
16 comments:
Passed out, huh!! Probably exactly what I would do!!! Can't say as I blam him either!!
I love those skins, have to go get them again!!
Such beautiful simmies!!!
Can't wait to read more!!!!
Oh, beautiful, beautiful!
I love this chapter, love Tim's 'Angel"...
She's gorgeous.
Tim must be sooo lucky, sharing a cell with her. ;-)
:O even more interesting that part one! :D
Very nice pictures!
Thanks so much, everyone! I'm really happy you are enjoying it. There's always this nagging feeling that people will hate it. I love writing, and now loving telling sims stories, but it's boring unless there's someone to enjoy them.
I'll echo the "lovely sims" comments. And a nice variety, too.
Nice closeup shots of the demon (who at first I thought was going to be female).
You've given me some ideas for my own stories (seeing the "handcuff" animation from Uni--I think I could use that *off to get the uni animation box*).
I love the special effects and that girl, wow, what a girl will he be bringing home, and maybe she's not an angel from Leah's comment and the pointy ear reference. Bet they will fall in love or at least he will, which makes me even more drawn into wanting to know what will happen next, great job on this installment, although I hope she can speak the same language as him
You are all too kind. I mean really. I've never gotten this kind of steady feedback before, and if you guys find something that doesn't fit or you don't think belongs, it's okay to say so. I'm a very new writer and have never had any solid instruction, but have read a tutorial here and there. I'm always looking to improve, both story and pictures, so don't hesitate to throw something out there if need be.
WOW! Astral this was an awesome chapter! :rah: The special effects were amazing, luuuv all of Enayla's skintones! (got them myself, lol) What I liked the most was the part were the demon was in the black pool, surrounded by all that RED! I know he is a demon, but BABY, HE IS HOT!!!! (fanning self);p
LOL! Woman, you crack me up. I just don't have it in myself to make an ugly demon. Thank you for your lovely compliments.
The way you brought that demon out of the black pool was inspired. Great shots again. And very interesting plot! I am really intrigued as to where this is going.
Poor Tim. Seems like he has his sense of humor to an extent. That has to be good.
Beautiful creative shots and characters. I like Tim's personality -- although he's frightened, he's keeping his wits about him.
Very well done!
Thanks for the lovely compliments! It's always exciting getting feedback. I would love to take credit for the demon rising from the pool, but, alas, I am photoshop impaired. My hubby helped me with a few shots.
What astounding shots and skins! Nothing wrong with having hubby help out, mine reads everything I do and offeres input, especially since I am verb tense challenged! Being married to a teacher came come in handy!
Truly, I am enjoying this immensely!!
~~Karen
Thank you, Karen. Yes, I'm severely photoshopped challenged. I just don't have the time and patience to learn it right now. Maybe when all the kids are in school full time...but for now hubby has a hand in it! Thank you for reading!
Wow! What an amazing chapter! I really had a great time reading it, and now I am curious for more. And you have really beautiful sims. At the moment, I'm writing a fantasy-themed story myself, and I haven't yet started to take the pictures, and I was thinking it was going to be hard. But now you just showed me that it can be done. (must do a really good search around)
Off to reading the next chapter.
Thank you, Lorianne. It is difficult sometimes, with fantasy themed settings and clothing. I posted elsewhere that I almost wished I had started with a non-fantasy story for my first major project, lol.
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