Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 13 - The Grand Tournament

>> Saturday, May 24, 2008

Tim forgave Ileeya. How could he not forgive her? During the weeks that followed, they tried to make small talk. But the tournament was always hanging over Tim's head. He was almost sick with worry.



He struggled with his feelings. He wanted to tell Ileeya how he felt, but thought it might be better if he didn't. It would only complicate things. If he died in the tournament, she could just continue on as she had before he came here.

The month before the Grand Tournament was spent entirely in the practice yard. Those few weeks went by quickly. Too quickly. Tim put all his concentration into learning as much as he could in the short amount that was left. Ileeya was happy with his progress, but Tim had his doubts. He just wanted to make it through the tournament in one piece.

The night before the tournament arrived before Tim was ready for it. He was a bundle of nervous energy and bounded uselessly around the small cell.



"Tim, try to relax. Here, have something to eat. You need to keep your strength up."

"I'm too nervous to eat. How can you do it? How can you be so calm?"

Ileeya shrugged. "Just used to it, I guess. I never really had a reason to be nervous. I was stuck in this strange world, with no family or friends. Life wasn't much too promising. Don't get me wrong. I didn't want to die. It's just that death compared to life here didn't seem like that bad of an alternative. They won't just throw you with anyone. You'll be paired with another competitor in the same category as yourself, it makes for a more challenging battle. You'll do fine. You seem to have a knack for swordplay."

He couldn't help but smile in return to her reassurance, but inside, he was falling apart.


Before they bedded down for the evening, Ileeya gave Tim a quick kiss on the lips and then laughed at the surprised look on his face. "For good luck," she said.

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The next morning, Tim was a wreck.

"Try to relax, Tim. I know it's hard, but you can't properly defend yourself against an attacker if you're so shaky."

It was impossible. He couldn't relax. He couldn't eat, either. He didn't trust his stomach to hold anything down.


"Just remember your lessons. Never strike out of haste. Watch your opponent carefully. Look for the right time. Never take your eyes off him, not even for a second. And above all else, think!"

A few moments later, Aark opened the door and grunted at them. It was time to go. The guard ushered them into the hallway where they joined a line of fellow prisoners and were led outside into the glaring heat of an average day in this world.

They were taken to a weapons room to choose their swords. The same choices were laid out before him as the 'practice weapons', but Tim noticed immediately that these weapons felt different. They were slightly heavier, but just had a sinister feel to them. The blades were sharpened to a wicked point and a razored edge. Tim hardly supressed a shiver as he thought about what this sword was capable of.

The prisoners, after gathering their tools for battle, were taken to a large courtyard off the side of a large stone structure which Tim guessed was the arena. The slaves were divided into their groups and then instructed to sit and wait their turn. Tim wasn't very familiar with anyone in his group. They all looked nervous, like he felt, and jittered like a bunch of scared rabbits. Tim looked nervously around him.



He found Ileeya sitting a short distance away with her group, which naturally included Jondak. As would be expected, he was sitting next to her, about as close as he could get without sitting on her lap, flirting with her. Tim wanted to go to her, to hold her, to smell her hair just one more time, to tell her he loved her. He tried to drink her in, just in case he never saw her again. He wanted hers to be the last face he saw. Her hair was tied back in its usual fashion, and the sun glinted off of it, revealing its bright silver highlights. Her enticingly pointed ear, which Tim was now accustomed to, was fully visible. She was so exquisite, and Jondak was such a sleaze. Tim hoped Jondak wouldn't make it through the tournament. As soon as the thought passed through Tim's head, Jondak turned and looked at him, smiling.



Tim was more than a little surprised to see Jondak rise and start toward him. His eyes stared into Tim's as he approached. Tim stood aprehensively and waited.

"Hello, Tim," Jondak said upon arrival. A thick inderterminable accent penetrated his words. Tim nodded in response, not trusting his voice.


Jondak stuck out his hand. "Good luck in your first of hopefully many Grand Tournaments." He smiled. Or at least his mouth did. His eyes remained as cold as a mountain stream in the dead of winter.

Tim looked from Jondak's inhuman eyes to his outstretched hand and back again. He managed to half smile, half smirk as he reached out to shake hands with the Irnaxxian.



A feeling of revusion mingled with panic flooded him when he touched Jondak's hand. The man smiled intently, knowingly. Tim desperately tried to pull his hand away, but to no avail.


Suddenly, was on his knees, pleading like a defenseless coward. Every muscle was weak and trembling. He felt fatigued, feverish. He heard himself begging. The point of one of Jondak's swords was raised high in the air, light glinting off its keen surface.


"Please...," Tim croaked.


"Stand, coward," Jondak growled, lowering his weapons.

Tim was frozen. He could do nothing.

"I said stand!"

Tim shakily rose to his feet.



Jondak's face was cruel and merciless, filled with self-satisfaction.


A split second later, Jondak's blade entered Tim's back with such force and speed, he wasn't sure it happened at first. He felt a ripping pierce through his chest, and realized with sickening horror that the blade went completely through him, tearing a path through his lung. Tim struggled to draw a breath. He gagged, as volumes of blood creeped up into his throat. Tim let out a gurgling cry with his last breath; and just before the thickening blackness enveloped him, he caught a glimpse of Jondak's evil, smiling face.


Tim was standing now, his hand in Jondak's tight grip. Instinctively, he jerked his hand away. His heart hammered fiercely in his chest and sweat ran in rivulets down his face.

"Good luck, again," Jondak whispered, before heading back to his group.

Slowly, reality sunk back in. What the hell was that? A nightmare in the middle of the day while he was awake? Through a handshake? And Jondak knew what he was doing, that was obvious. The way he leered at Tim when the 'vision' or whatever the hell it was, was over, Jondak knew. He had forced Tim to see that. Ileeya had said Irnaxxians possessed some minor telepathic abilities, but this seemed pretty major to him.


He looked over to where Jondak was sitting. When he saw Tim looking at him, he smiled and waved. For the first time since he viewed the alien, Tim felt a raw panic when he looked at Jondak.

With the strange encounter with Jondak still fresh in his mind, Tim sat nervously with his group. What a vivid vision! No one in his group noticed anything unusual about the handshake. Now instead of simply worrying about his own and Ileeya's lives, he had Jondak to worry about. If he didn't get killed in the arena, he would probably die at the hands of Jondak. Okay, get a grip, he told himself. Ileeya had said that Irnaxxians use their powers to their advantage. Apparently Jondak was trying to rile him up a little. Or a lot. Why? Why would Jondak be trying to intimidate Tim? Did Tim pose some sort of threat? He wasn't nearly as good a fighter as Jondak, a point made quite clear by the groups they had been placed into.



Was he jealous? Of what? Jondak was a good looking guy. Was it because of Ileeya? That was ridiculous. Nothing was even going on there. But it wasn't ridiculous. Tim recalled how Jondak acted at every lunch in the hall. Flirting with Ileeya. She had told Tim that Jondak pursued her because she refused him. Maybe Jondak was getting tired of the chase and wanted his prize. Maybe he wanted Tim out of the way to be sure he wouldn't interfere with Jondak's conquest. Ileeya could probably beat him in a sword fight, but Jondak was much stronger. He could overpower her physically. And then there's that telepathy thing. Could he control her mentally? The idea frightened him.



His thoughts were interrupted by a rude slap on the shoulder. One of the guards gestured at him and then to the arena.


It was his turn.




He sighed deeply and followed the guard across the yard to the arena door.


He looked back over his shoulder for what he hoped wasn't his last glimpse of Ileeya. She was standing serenely, resting her hand her hip. A slight blush colored her cheeks and a small smile played about her lips. She did not see him looking at her.


The arena was about the size of a basketball court. Just like on his own planet, rows of seats lined the perimeter. Several creatures sat upon the wooden benches, quietly; anxiously awaiting the bloody battle that was about to begin. A raised area sat on the west side of the arena, where richly dressed aliens sat. Tim saw the king of this province there, and surmised the others must be the rulers of the other lands that Ileeya had mentioned.



He saw his competitor for the first time. The creature was huge, covered in thick green scales. Bright green eyes seemed to glow within his angular face, which seemed tranquil, confident.


Tim attempted to choke back the bile rising in his throat. If his heart beat any faster, he was sure it would fly right out of his chest. He swallowed nervously and waited for what would happened next.


The guard walked to the center of the arena, then beckoned forth the two competitors. With rubbery legs Tim willed himself to move. He suddenly found himself in the center, without remembering each step he took to get there. Close up, his opponent was even more frightening. He shook his sword at Tim and growled. The crowd started to cheer.

The guard shushed the crowd, then introduced the two to each other before addressing the audience. Tim saw little point in this, as one of them would not be leaving alive. His opponent, Slogg, snarled hungrily at him. When Tim's name was mentioned in the formal introduction, the crowd let out a chorus of boos and hisses. But when Slogg was introduced, the crown went wild.



Slogg lifted his arms to the crowd, and they yelled and cheered even louder. The fighters bowed to one another at a command, then the guard ran to the other side of the arena. At a second command the two poised themselves for battle.


Tim tried to swallow his fear and concentrated on getting through this alive. Slogg, being experienced in arena fighting, ignored the excited cheers and the staring eyes of the audience. This only proved to make Tim more apprehensive.


Slogg struck first, but it was a hasty strike which Tim easily dodged. For the first several minutes Tim only doged the blows and studied his opponent. He noticed almost immediately that Slogg wasn't even looking for an unguarded spot, but just tossing swings and hoping to hit, depending on his great strength to win his battle.

Tim began to feel more relaxed now that he knew his opponent's weakness. He waited for the right moment and struck a strong blow at the lizard's midsection. Slogg howled in pain and struck blindly, catching Tim off guard.


Slogg's sword cleaved through Tim's right shoulder, causing him to fall down on one knee. Before Tim could regain his footing, another blow came at his head. Tim tried to block it with his sword. He managed to deflect most of the blow, but the tip of Slogg's sword sliced across his neck. Had he not raised his sword in time, the blow would have been fatal.


Tim recovered quickly and was on his feet within seconds. His own wounds temporarily forgotten by a surge of adrenaline, he got back into the rhythm of the fight and sought an opening.


Slogg had a gloating smile on his face. He was full of himself now and it shouldn't be too difficult to find an unguarded spot. Tim was doing rather well blocking with his sword, and a moment later found his opening.


He waited until the lizard struck, then Tim simultaneously jumped to the side and struck Slogg in the stomach. He could feel the resistance as his sword ripped through Slogg's midsection. Almost in slow motion the creature howled, as his belly opened up and blood rose to the surface, and Slogg started to fall backward.


Slogg roared in agony and made a hasty swing at Tim. This time Tim blocked it easily. Slogg fell in a squealing heap and died at Tim's feet. A pungent scent rose into the air as Slogg's blood gushed out of his stomach and stained the ground. Tim's stomach heaved and bile gurgled in his throat. I will not vomit! he told himself.


The crowd was silent for a moment, then erupted in a chorus of cheers. They rose to their feet, exalting their new champion. Tim looked up at them and his vision blurred. The loss of blood from his neck and shoulder, combined with the adrenaline rush caused Tim to feel weak.


He swayed on his feet as he felt his world going gray. He fell to one knee while the world swam around him. He could no longer hear the cheering of the crowd; the sound of his pounding heart filled his ears, throbbed his temples, enveloped his head.


I will not pass out! he told himself as he took one last glance at the audience. Then the sea of darkness engulfed him.

21 comments:

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 8:10 AM  

A nice fat chapter! I'm still not completely satisfied with my blood, but I did those pictures about 6 times and I don't feel like doing them again, lol. They'll do. I hope you guys like it!

Damon May 24, 2008 at 9:39 AM  

I read this chapter before on Insim and I read it again! A very great chapter and the blood looks great!

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 9:48 AM  

Do you really think so, Damon? I feel there is too much of a glare on the puddle. Of course, I've never actually seen a puddle of blood before, lol, so I guess I wouldn't know first hand. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment - it's very much appreciated!

Leah May 24, 2008 at 10:41 AM  

I had no time, but I just had to read this.
Great job, Ariana - I loved it and it may have beena nice fat chapter, but it was still over way too soon!

The puddle of blood... what can I say? It doesn't look quit natural, but hey, it's alien blood after all; you could probably even pull it off to give him purple blood, so don't worry about it too much.

Will Tim have to fight again that same day? You'd better post your next chapter soon, young lady!

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 12:41 PM  

Aw, I'm so flattered, Leah! I'm happy you took the time to read it and even happier you enjoyed it. I could actually post the next chapter very soon, but I don't want to overwhelm those who are reading it. Lots of projects are being done these days, and I'm so far behind in my reading that I would feel like I was being greedy if I posted again so soon. But, I'll try to post it next weekend. Thanks for reading!

scarlet_white May 24, 2008 at 1:57 PM  

I just read it and loved it, although some days I feel sorry when someone dies, even as it is an opponent, the threatening illusion was brilliant, it is a great intimidating technique although Tim seemed to be wise enough not to feel to much fear over him. And indeed it is strange he focuses so much on Tim.

And as the blackout attheend, my guess is from his wounds and exhausion, poor opponent, sorry he had to die

thewynd May 24, 2008 at 2:27 PM  

I was so excited to see the tournament has begun! Ariana this was brilliant! I found myself holding my breath throughout Tim's battle.

Your shots were well done and the storyline is getting more intriguing than ever.

S@n May 24, 2008 at 3:05 PM  

Fabulous!!!!

Excellent chapter!! it was soo dramatic!! so excited.. The fighting sequence was great! I hope Tim will be OK..

Jondak, he is creepy! very handsome though! :D lol I love his "full of himself" personality... he is so evil and that just makes Tim live more miserable. But of course

But I have to admit Jondak makes the story even better! :D He is a perfect devil :D

I didn't feel it was a long chapter, lol it was way too short for me!!

I love your writing Ariana, I have say it a lot of times, but you have such a wonderful imagination for fantasy! I could never write any fantasy at all!

Great job!! I can't hardly wait for next chapter!!!

I loved all your pictures!!! the last one was tripple WOW!! fantastic job!

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 7:10 PM  

Pablo - I'm sorry you feel bad for the opponent. But being stuck in this situation does have an impact on Tim in the next chapter. Tim was very scared, but he forced himself to think. He would have been finished off pretty quickly if he let his fear get the best of him. Yes, Tim passing out was because of loss of blood and the end of his adrenaline rush. It was all just too much. Thanks for your comments!

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 7:14 PM  

Gayl - Aw, thanks! I'm happy you liked it. I really had a good time with this chapter and tried to slow things down a bit to add more drama. Thanks so much for reading!

Astral Faery May 24, 2008 at 7:28 PM  

Wow! Thanks, Sandy! What wonderful comments. I love fantasy - I always have. It's just a part of me. Sometimes I have difficulty switching gears to reality, lol.

I used your tutorial to do the collage where Jondak is stabbing Tim - you had such easy step by step directions. I've used that technique in future chapters, too.

Jondak is a bad boy. He's kind of sad, actually, because he thinks he's all that, but he keeps forgetting Shirra is pulling his puppet strings. He's pretty, isn't he? I think he turned out well. I'm extra proud of him and Tim because I actually created them - most of my story sims are tweaked downloaded sims, but not those two. Thanks for reading, Sandy, and I'll hopefully be able to catch up on your story soon.

KDSGS May 25, 2008 at 11:02 AM  

Ariana, I was glued to my screen, stunning shots and visuals, the close-ups, adding to the tension! I felt I was watching "Gladiator", and I mean that as a compliment! Loved it when Slogg lifted his arms to the crowd, very 'Russell Crowe'! (though he doesn't look like him, LOL)
The long shot of the arena, and your descriptive writing, especially during the fight, just ramped up the tension! And that last shot, the blurring, excellent!
The blood was a nice touch, did you do it in photoshop? I must try that for my upcoming gunfight!
I was rooting for Tim all the way, what a great character he is, so well-rounded, a man not afraid to show his fear and apprehension, yet when the moment calls for it, he can be ruthless and strong!
I loved this Ariana, great work!!

Astral Faery May 25, 2008 at 2:34 PM  

Thanks muchly, Karen! I'm glad you read and enjoyed it. You pretty much nailed Tim's personality on the head. He's playful and fun, unsure and afraid, but manages to find confidence and deal with the tasks ahead of him. Just wait until future chapters - things get very difficult for him!

I'm glad I managed to capture the tension of the battle! I was hoping I did. Yes, the blood was done in photoshop and I did the pictures over and over again, lol. It's a work in process. Thanks for your compliments.

Colliegirl May 25, 2008 at 11:16 PM  

That was way cool! Tim was so awesome with that sword!
I was really impressed with your lizard man. I don't recall seeing one like that before. He sure was green! I'm surprised that his blood wasn't green too! :lol:
Poor, Tim! He's going through a terrible time. I don't see how he'll be able to fight again any time too soon. Experiences like that can leave you emotionally and physically exhausted! Ileeya didn't seem rightly concerned for him when the guard came to take him away. She didn't seem to be even watching him. What's with that, I wonder?
Those were some excellent pictures, especially the close ups, and that last one that showed us his vision blurring as he passed out. Excellent work! I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next. Don't keep us too long in suspense! :)

Astral Faery May 26, 2008 at 11:55 AM  

Thank you, Tamara! I thought about making the blood a different color, but I feel it makes more of an impact if it's red.

Ileeya has a fear of attachment and lots of ugly things in her past that plague her. You'll get to find out more about those things in chapter 15 (I believe). She doesn't attach easily, because she's seen too many friends come and go - so she has kind of this hard shell around her. But she'll soften up as we go along. ;) I'm glad you liked it. I'm planning the next update for next weekend - but if I have some extra time I might post it sooner. I have a hectic week coming up, and plan to start shooting for chapter 24, too, so we'll see.

S.B. May 29, 2008 at 8:02 AM  

Very suspenseful and well written! I really like the sequence with Jondak and the mind thing he did to put Tim off balance. Well done!

I've never tried to do blood and doubt I ever will (ok never say never, but probably not) -- it looked just fine to me.

The variety of alien characters you use definitely adds to the whole strange situation. And the swordfight, once again, Bravo!!

Wonderful chapter!

Astral Faery May 30, 2008 at 8:51 AM  

Thanks, Beth! You've been really busy, lol. I promise to thank you for all of your wonderful comments on the other chapters, too, but I just wanted to let you know that they are all very much appreciated, and I'm so happy you took the time to read and comment. I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story, too!

Lorianne June 25, 2008 at 1:40 AM  

I'm trying to catch up with this story again.

I was reading, and when I finished I realised that I was holding my breath the whole time. Ok, I kind of knew that Tim would not die, since there are more chapters to this story already, but I still was so afraid for him. Poor Tim! How is he going to feel now that he has actually killed somebody?

And about your pictures - they are amazing and wonderfully done. I really admire the way that you manage to pose your Sims into whatever action they are doing. I wish I could do that - but I just don't have that much imagination lol

Well done!

Astral Faery June 28, 2008 at 10:07 AM  

Thanks, Lorianne! I greatly appreciate the compliments. I'm glad you were riveted and that it was an exciting chapter.

Yeah, somtimes posing sims is a real pain. But I wanted a certain look for this, so I had to deal with it. It was agonizing, to say the least, lol.

Anonymous September 14, 2008 at 7:33 AM  

WOW! My dear Ariana, I am blown away! :rah: This was a fabulous chapter! I LOVE all the wonderful clothes all your characters and extras are wearing, where do you find such a large selection?!

Your beautiful writing combined with your great pictures draw the reading to all the excitement! I am amazed as to how you got so many people in the audience to cheer, sit, and stand like a real arena!

The sword fighting sequence and the blood were AWESOME! :rah :rah: Great chapter my friend! :wub:

Astral Faery September 16, 2008 at 2:06 PM  

Zayury - thank you so much! I'm glad you found the time to read, and your compliments mean a lot! Thank you, friend! :)

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