Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 5
>> Saturday, February 9, 2008
Despite all the questions now running rampant through Tim's brain, the only somewhat logical thing he could think to say was, "Does that ring enable you to speak and understand any language?"
"Yes. Any language it's exposed to. I can't understand or speak a new language until the ring hears it first."
"Okay, now I'm really confused."
"Well, like when I first met you. I couldn't communicate with you and you couldn't understand me when I spoke to you. But after you finally spoke, the ring was able to pick up the new language and translate it to me. And now we're able to communicate."
"How come they haven't taken it away from you?"
She shrugged. "The people of this world have no interest in silver. As for the ring being magic, they either don't know or don't care. Often I work as a translator for the guards."
"Where did you get your ring?"
"It was a gift from our father."
"What?"
"You said it was a gift from 'our' father."
She chuckled nervously. "I'm afraid you are mistaken. I said my father. It was a gift from my father." She said it as if she were trying to convince herself as well as him. "He gave it to me for our--I mean my birthday."
There. She said it again. He distinctly heard it this time. He had almost believed her when she said he was mistaken about what he had heard the first time, thinking maybe he was still dizzy from his fight with Aark. But this time there was no mistaking what he had heard. She was hiding something. He decided to ask her more details about her past.She paused a moment before answering. "No. I'm an only child."
"Me, too. It can be pretty lonely growing up without any brothers or sisters, can't it?"
"Yes," she said almost inaudibly. She absently picked loose threads off her dress. Something was definitely going on here. He had stirred up painful memories and regretted it.
"Are you okay? I'm sorry if I..."
"I'm just fine," she answered, but when she looked up at him her eyes were moist with unshed tears.
"Look, Ileeya..."
"We better get some sleep. It's getting late."
He decided to let the matter drop for now. For the first time since coming to this strange world he remembered he had a watch on his wrist. He pulled up his shirt sleeve and was surprised to see that it read nearly 1:30 in the morning. It had only been 6 p.m. when he took his dog out for a walk, just before he 'arrived' here.
Tim crawled into bed wearily, his muscles already beginning to stiffen. He lied in there, staring at the wall thinking of Gertie and Bones. What would they do when he didn't return? A wave of despair washed over him. He didn't want to be here. He wanted to go home.
"My liege, I have carefully reviewed the old prophecies, and this, Tim, matches the description exactly."
"Then it is our duty to prepare him. Have one of our best train him well. Ileeya or Jondak should prove sufficient."
"But sire, if he dies in the Grand Tournament, he cannot fulfill his destiny."
"If he dies in the Grand Tournament," the king replied stoically, "then he is not the one."
22 comments:
OMG!!! The tournament? Poor Tim, he has to fight someone and I'm afraid it would be a devil, a monster or something worst, that "world" is filled with strange beings, and creatures and OMG, I can't wait to see the big tournament, I liked what the kind said, lol..
If he died, then he is not the one, lol, as simple as that! :D
Poor Tim he was no idea!
Great update, waiting for next installment :D
What a great cliffhanger!!!!
I can't wait to see what happens at the tournament either!!!
Hmmm, if that ring is as good as Ileeya says, then that was not an honest translation mistake. Methinks, a storm of lies has been brewing.....can't wait to see it unfold.
Thank you, Sandy! Yes, Tim is in for a pretty rocky ride. Thank you for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks, Melissa! Oh yes, a storm, indeed, lol. Thanks for the feedback!
My thoughts exactly about the ring thing. Great installment, and it seems there will be some bloodshed, so I will be waiting for this tournament, hope he hears eye of the tiger while he trains lol.
No problem about the installment being short, at least you covered enough to keep us waiting and wanting for more
Aw, well thank you, Pablo. LOL - Eye of the Tiger. I'm going to be humming that to myself all night!
And yes, there will be blood...
and lots of other fun stuff ;)
I have just read all of the parts one after the other, and my God, is it exciting! I have a few suspicions about Ileeya, I think that Tim's dream about the angel turning into a demon have something to do with it. Does she have an evil side?
and poor Tim being entered into a tournament, in which he OBVIOUSLY will not die, because of the prophecy.
Great story, I eagerly await the next part.
Dear Ariana, wonderful chapter! I like the 'mystery' developing in Ileeya's past! Love the magic ring idea! A tournament YEAY! That is going to be so kool! Very interesting that the king mentioned that Ileeya was one of his best! Does this mean she can kick poor Tim's behind?! LOL! ;D Kool story girl, keep it coming! :D
Thanks, Sam! It's always exciting getting new readers. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. And as far as Tim not dying in the tournament - well, we shall have to see. ;)
Thanks, Zayury! I'm happy you're reading. Yes, Ileeya has quite a past, as you'll see in upcoming chapters. And yeah, she could kick Tim's booty, lol.
I love to see a guy messed up like Tim, LOL!
Love that ring, but I love the idea of an upcoming tournament even better.
Go Tim!
Thanks for your comments, Leah!
Very interesting turn of events, a tournament sounds intriguing indeed! And I love cliffhangers! Nicely done Ariana!!
Your costumes are shots are inspired!
~~Karen
Thanks, Karen! I'm really getting excited about this story, and I love being a storyteller.
The One...now that's interesting...and I wonder if Ileeya has a twin who is a demon...or an alterego perhaps.
Very intriguing. Looking forward to where this is going and once again, wonderful story and fabulous pictures. You really know how to tell a tale.
Oh gosh, Gayl. Thank you sooo much! The next chapter will be up soon.
Hi this is Dee and I just read all of the chapters. This is a great story I can't wait to see what happens. The pictures are amazing.
Hi, Dee, and welcome! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.
Wow A prophecy. That's kind of funny, because the fantasy-themed story that I am writing is actually called "The Prophecy".
I have my feelings about Ileeya - Tim dreamt of her as an angel and a demon, she used the word "our" twice, looked pained when asked if she had siblings. Hmmmm. Makes me think. I guess I'll just have to wait to see if I'm right.
If you're thinking what I think you're thinking - then you're probably right. My story is quite full of cliches, lol. Thanks for the comments.
Another intriguing chapter!
"Our" father? Interesting, and even more interesting that Ileeya immediately denied saying it.
Poor Tim. Nothing much good ever comes of being the "one". Prove yourself and then what? Here you go -- you're the one, now go get that dragon, or something equally awful. And failure usually results in your demise.
Well you certainly hit that nail on the head! Being the one isn't going to go over very smoothly. Equally awful, indeed. Tim has lots to look forward to, lol.
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