Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 10 and 11
>> Friday, April 18, 2008
The next few days were as routine as Tim had come to expect. Ileeya greeted him as he woke up, he was subjected to a backbreaking day of fieldwork under the scorching sun, followed by a very welcome but too short wash period, and then lunch at the hall.
Now, when Tim saw Jondak sitting near Ileeya, he wanted to rip his lungs out. The gall of this guy really bothered him. And he always seemed to know his actions bothered Tim. He wore a self satisfied smile while he flirted with her, and made sure to look over to see what Tim thought about it. He had to know at least partly how Tim felt, it must have been evident on his face.
Finally, it was time for another practice day. And it was a hot one. The sun beat down mercilessly on them while Ileeya worked with Tim. She was a calm and patient teacher, never losing her temper when Tim made a mistake. Even with his most frequent mistakes, the worst she would do was scowl at him. Tim had to restrain himself from smiling dumbly at her when she talked to him.
Ileeya hit hard and fast. Tim just couldn't believe how well coordinated she was and how she easy she made it all look. But as quick as she was, she still seemed frail, and Tim was afraid to hit too hard. He didn't want to hurt her.
"You're holding back, Tim. You need to stop doing that."
"I'm sorry," he panted, "I just can't hit you. I'm afraid...I was always brought up to never hit women."
With a little persuasion, Ileeya was able to convince Aark into letting a third member train with them. She told Tim it wasn't unusual for her to work with two at once, that way she could get a different vantage point and see where the problems were.
Ileeya found someone who was pretty evenly matched with him, but a little better to allow room for Tim to improve. She also had Aark take Tim to the weapons room to change swords. The other one was too heavy and bulky, and the shield only served to slow him down. He didn't argue, because he was sure she knew more than he did about it all.
Every other practice session, Ileeya would leave Tim and Gylen to practice their newly learned techniques and go work on her own skills. Tim took an instant liking to Gylen. Though he never spoke, the two didn't have a hard time understanding each other.
The sword become a comfortable weight in his hand. Tim looked forward to these practice sessions. He was a good student and practiced hard, hoping to create a better standing for himself the next time one of the tournaments rolled around. When he was sparring, time seemed to slip away and he could almost forget he was on a strange world.
After one particularly successful practice session, when he was feeling proud of himself, he couldn't help but ask Ileeya why the guards would give their slaves weapons, and then teach them to fight. Weren't they afraid the slaves would overrun the place and escape? He had tried to keep his tone light, despite how illogical the situation was.
But her mood changed immediately and she assumed a defensive stance.
"Because you'd be ripped to shreds. These weapons are intended for practicing only, and cannot hold up against the sturdier weapons the guards possess. They would have no hesitation to slaughtering the entire slave population - new slaves are acquired quite easily. I highly discourage it. The guards would take a revolt as a sport, eagerly hunting down each and every last one of the prisoners, if they even managed to escape before they found a sword through their chest."
He felt stupid for even suggesting it. He felt like he had been put back in his place, and didn't bring it up again.
~*~*~*~*
Chapter 11
Tim leaped to the side to get out of their path. It was easily done, he realized, because they were not moving toward him, but toward Ileeya behind him. Ileeya screamed in terror and tried to run. The woman and her horse galloped up to their helpless victim. The horse made a wheezing sound as it sucked air into its large lungs, then let it out in an enormous jet of flame.
"Shirra, no!!" Ileeya screamed an instant before the flames engulfed her. She simultaneously shrieked in agony and burst into flames, her once luxurious hair turning to ash within seconds.
A low rumbling sound surrounded him, and a second later, Tim realized the woman, Shirra, was making it. Hysterical laughter burst forth from her mouth. The sound sent a chill up Tim's spine. It was a heartless noise.
"Bitch!" Shirra screamed as Ileeya fell into the flames, pleading with her to stop.
A small sound escaped his lips and the woman abruptly stopped laughing, jerking around on horsetop to look at him. Her eyes were darker now, almost black. They glinted hungrily at him.
She didn't take her eyes off him as she turned her steed around to face him. She stared into him. Her icy glare froze Tim's blood.
"Lover," she cooed at him in a gravelly voice. "Come to me."
She was suddenly atop him, growling and ripping at his clothing. Her touch burned like dry ice and Tim shrieked. She laughed at his futile attempts to stop her, forcefully pushing him down into the flowers with superhuman strength. He was being taken advantage of by a monster! Her ghastly face lit up when she saw his fear. He screamed.
The demon woman frowned at him and started shaking him. She was muttering something he couldn't comprehend. She intentionally laid her hand on Tim's cheek, scalding it. He screamed again and opened his eyes.
He suddenly felt happy that it was just a dream. He was glad Ileeya was standing before him with her flesh unmarred. Hell, at this very moment he was even happy he was locked in this cell on on a different world. He grabbed Ileeya and clung to her, still shaking. She hugged him back, murmuring comforting things in his ear.
"It was so strange," he told her. "I dreamt of Shirra, your friend, and she looked just like you."
At the mention of Shirra's name, Ileeya stiffened. She pulled back from him and said, "Yes, that is strange." A tear slid down her cheek and she wiped it away with a shaking hand.
"Would you tell me? I mean, what happened to her?"
"There's not much to tell. It's just so sad. There was a fire in our village one night. Many people died. Shirra...Shirra included."
"I'm really sorry, Ileeya. It must be very painful to lose a good friend. How long ago did it happen?"
"The fire happened a year or so before I arrived here, about eleven years ago. She looked a little like me, you know. She had the same hair and eye color. People used to think we were sisters. We were very close."
Now it was Tim's turn to console her as Ileeya cried against him. He comforted her with gentle words whispered into her pointed ear. Her body felt warm against his. Tim reveled in the feeling of her in his arms. For months he had wanted to see what this felt like, and it was better than he could have imagined. He wanted more, to gently kiss her and take her pain away, but now was not the time. He got one more smell of her hair before she pulled away from him and retreated wordlessly to her bed.
For the remainder of the night he got little sleep. He was afraid to dream again. Everytime his brain reached dream sleep, he would pull himself out of it. He was almost grateful when breakfast was finally set inside the door, announcing the time to awaken. He was exhausted from his rough night, but a full day of field work was sounding pretty good right about now.
19 comments:
Oh, nice chapters!
I loved to see the training sessions, and that Tim is making improvement.
And chapter 11... so romantic and so eerie.
Really well done!
I also loved the pictures, esp. the ones with the cloudy skies. Did you do that in photoshop, or do you havea hack or something to get them like that?
They look just gorgeous!
That was fast, lol! Thank you so much for the compliments. The cloudy skies are a backdrop I found - makes things so much easier. They come in panels, and there is a line at the edge of each one - I had to smudge the clouds a bit to hide it. I'll share the site I found them at with the forum, if you'd like.
Ariana, I love all the dreams narrations, they are so well done, so well described and the pictures really complement your already beautiful writing!
I'm happy that Ileeya is finally talking about her life to Tim, he really does care about her, and I'm so glad they find support in each other.
I see the attraction is everywhere,they care for each other deeply and that will only grow to be a beautiful love... some times I really feel sorry about Tim... what when this thing is all over? Will he go home empty handed? or will he get to keep his girl next to him?
Love is such a difficult "crazy little thing" you see even when we are talking about the same "Species" It's really difficult to understand each other, and now Imagine Ileeya and a human!
Poor Tim, life has not been good for him! And he has to fight with those demons!
I don't really know where you get your ideas, but wow, they are fantastic! Congratulations!
You got such a great imagination! You writing just flows really nice!
Great job!
Great Chapter, and I'm so happy that Tim is improving in his fighting skills, hopefully he wont get his butt kicked during the tournament!
All right! Two chapters in one! It's so good to see Tim improving with his training but rather disconcerting to consider that when he gets to the tournament, the weapons will be much more deadly.
The dream sequence was really something. I love the progression from seemingly innocent to deadly.
The shots are always wonderful and the story is just getting more and more interesting!
Thanks, Sandy! What beautiful comments!
They certainly do make the odd pair, don't they? As for where they'll end up, I can't tell you, lol, but you already know that. ;)
Tim is improving - and it's a good thing, too. He's going to need it! Thank you for reading!
Thank you, Gayl! It's kind of like my birthday to log in and see all these fabulous comments. They sure do make my day. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapters, and I promise I haven't forgotten about your fabulous story - I'll make my way back someday. I've started reading Beth's as well, you're both fantastic!
Thank you for reading! :)
No worries Ariana...I was just so happy to see your update! I loved it!
I keep wondering if there was some sort of prophecy about some stranger coming to the tournament. I'm still so intrigued by why they picked Tim. I guess we''l have to just wait and see.
Wonderful! Such contrasts between the two chapters! Your descriptive writing is fantastic, it really adds to your story and the accompanying pictures!
Tim is so likable, you really feel you are on the journey with him.
The dream sequence blew me away. Astounding shots and description, loved the horse's burning red demon eyes, nice touch!
Tim and Ileeya growing closer, lovely the way you are taking that slow and careful!
A lovely update, Ariana!
~~Karen
Gayl - hopefully I'll be able to answer all those questions as time goes on. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Karen - thank you! Yes, it is very slow and careful - Tim isn't the type to just go hop into bed with anyone. He's kind of old fashioned. Thank you so much for reading!
Wonderful chapter dear Ariana! Awesome special effects, the dream sequence was fabulous! I love the way the relationship is building betweent Tim and Ileeya and his new sparring partner! All your scenes look very realistic, wonderful story my friend! :wub: :D
So excited to find TWO chapters. I really liked the way you incorporated the dream and especially liked the way he was allowed to embrace Ileeya when he awoke. Like it is the beginning of his true dreams becoming a reality.
This story just becomes more and more intriguing. Very anxious to see if Tim will always be stuck in this "other" world or if he will return home, and wondering what the rest of his life will look like either way.
Bring some more...soon...great job!
Tam
Wow! What an amazing chapter combo! That black horse was way cool! I'd be scared to death to run into him. How did you get that Nightmare to belch fire like that? It looked so realistic!
I like it that Ileeya and Tim seem to be growing closer in their relationship. Love is definitely in the air! And Gylen seemed really cool too... Would like to hear some more about him. :)
Great work, Ariana! Can't wait for what happens next! You have a wonderful imagination and a great knack at telling stories! :)
Thanks, Zayury! It's nice to see you. Glad you could stop by for a read. Thank you for your comments.
Tam - everyone is probably wondering that, too - where will Tim end up? Only time can tell - because I'm not, lol! Thanks for reading! When I finally get over this nasty sickness I can update.
Tamara - thanks! I'm glad it looks like the nightmare is breathing fire - it's a matter of placement. I was pretty pleased with the way it turned out. I'm thrilled you are enjoying it. Much more to come!
Took my time to come but glad I did, I loved the training sessions as well and to see Tim is very ordinary, and making improvement, I loved the logic she gave him on why the slaves shouldn't revolt and I am starting to wonder about how much time he has been there in the slave camp.
As for the nightmare or whatever it was, I wonder, Ileeya was burned in the dream but she says in reality it happened the other way around, I wonder if that is the truth. Glad I won't have to wait for long for the next chapter, I will go read it now
Hmmm, seems to me like Ileeya is not being honest with Tim when it comes to Shirra. She is definetly hiding something from him. But why? Is she trying to protect Shirra? Doesn't she know that Shirra is still alive? Or maybe she likes to believe that Shirra is dead and not evil? Oh, so many questions!
Your pictures are amazing too. I especially loved the nightmare scenes - they were awesome.
Thanks, Pablo! I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad it's making you think. Being so new to writing, I have big fears of making a huge blunder, so the feedback is so very important. That way I can see the impact that each chapter is having, and what people's general thoughts are. I don't directly go into a timeline in the story, but I hint at it once in awhle. Probably not often enough, though.
Oh, Lorianne! Such beautifully, wonderfully, fabulous questions! And oh so very appropriate. You'll get answers to them all - a couple of them in the next two chapters. Thanks so much for reading!
Beautiful work! Love the backdrop you used for clouds1 I've been considering using gunmod's lighting for a few shots, but I'd have to remove it immediately. This was inspired!
And yes, the horses! A slow canter, a trot, turn on the forehand...absolutely gorgeous!
Provocative and romantic, but Ileeya still seems to be avoiding some kind of full explanation. I'm glad Tim has finally realized that the "creatures" he's been fighting might be fully realized beings who don't have any more interest in being there than he does. Good job!!
Thank you, Beth!
I'm so glad I found DragonSlave's fabulous horses! This chapter would not have been the same without them.
I've never used gunmod's lighting, so I'm not familiar with it, but I have heard of it. These backdrops came from Retail Sims. They really helped a lot!
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