Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 3
>> Thursday, January 24, 2008
She landed before him and stretched her arms out to him...
...then gasped for breath suddenly. Her hands fluttered up to her neck and she tried to speak, but it was useless.
She fell to her knees, suffocating.
He rushed to her side to help her, but it was too late. He looked at his fallen angel and felt an overwhelming sense of despair.
He looked behind him in a dazed stupor. The creatures were almost upon him now, grunting excitedly.
Its hand brushed his face and he screeched in agony at its touch.
The demon cackled, rising into the air. Apalled, Tim turned to run.
The demon grabbed him by the neck. Tim heard his own screams echo back at him. Icy hands choked him, stifling his screams and his breath. He grabbed at the hands, but he couldn't pry them off his neck.
"No," he croaked.
The hands squeezed tighter, and he staggered, falling to the ground.
17 comments:
Oh dear...deeper and deeper....I wonder if this is a dream within a dream sequence. He did pass out at the end of the last one...still Great job!!!
I love this place you have created. So void of anything....perfect...LOL!!!!
My thought exactly, since it didn't seemed to have a continuity from the second part I though it was a dream, specially since that angelical woman is not with him, incredible sims you have, very well done ambience, you are doing very well.
:D I also think this part was a dream :D
I love the CC you are using :D and the set and scenes were very well taken care of :D
Poor thing... what a horrible nightmare, inside another nightmare...or reality! ;) Wonderful writing, you hold us captive with your first words and pictures! Love your cc also! :) I'm hooked! :D
I love hearing everyone's thoughts about what's happening in the story and what they think is going to happen. I'll try to have part 4 up over the weekend so you guys can see if you're right. Thanks for the comments. :)
I have to agree. The void you have created is really brilliant. It almost looks like the angel was fading away in that one shot.
Great story! I am hooked.
Really eerie ambiance, that awful dream feeling, and the bizarre, empty set is just perfect! Very interesting piece of work!
Well, thanks you two! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll have an update soon.
Great Chapter!
I loved how the beautiful Angel was replaced by a Demon - been wondering about the Angel and the Demon for a long while now, ever since I first read this story and I think I know what's going on, but I won't tell.
Wouldn't want to spoil anyones fun!
Besides - I could be wrong of course, and I love surprises. :D
You are really pulling me in! Excellent shots and great sets. I too, wonder if he is dreaming! Look forward to more!
~~Karen
Thank you, Leah. I look forward to seeing if you're right as time goes on. Thank you for your compliments!
Thank you, Karen. I appreciate your comments and I'm happy you like it.
WOW!!! Everytime I think that it just can't get any better, you surprise me! I love your shots, the way you set up your Sims to illustrate the story is amazing. And your writing style keeps me intrigued. You're a very gifted writer.
And about this chapter: I too think that this is a dream since there is no continuity with the previous chapter, but I'm off to reading the next chapter to find out!
You just made my day! What thoughtful comments - very, very much appreciated. Glad you're enjoying!
What a beautiful angel! I really liked her ... I'm not so sure about the demon who appeared in her place, though. She's creepy!
Poor guy... What a nightmare to wake up in!
Beautiful work! I love the pictures!
Thank you, Tamara! I love those angel wings, they're so pretty. Thanks for the comments.
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