Between the Light and the Darkness - Chapter 15 - Introduction to Evil
>> Thursday, June 12, 2008
If he failed in his mission, Shirra would make his nightmares come true. This was simply another job he had to perform for her. The only way he could get through it was by pretending she was Ileeya. He would never tell her that, of course, she would probably kill him.
He had hoped Tim wouldn't get through the tournament, but wasn't surprised when he emerged successful. He was pretty decent with a sword. He wondered why Shirra wanted the human so badly. If she wanted him, why did she let him risk his life in the tournament? With her powers, he wondered why she didn't just take Tim herself instead of getting him to do her dirty work.
Jondak wished Shirra would wake up and send him back to his cell. The bed was comfortable, but he would almost prefer to sleep on the hard prison bed than be with her. He couldn't wait till she had what she wanted, so he could get what he wanted.
Shirra awoke and stretched languidly. "Mmmmm. You performed well, Jondak." She climbed out of the bed and walked to its end. Jondak did the same. "As your reward, you'll only have to entertain my pets for five minutes, instead of ten."
"Uh-uh-uh, Jondak. We don't want to argue, do we?" she said in her sweet voice.
"I just thought, since I pleased you..."
"Oh. You did, but you musn't forget the penalty if you fail your mission."
"I won't. I promise. Just please don't send me back there. How about if I..." he reached out to stroke her. A searing pain shot through his arm and he screamed, jerking his hand away. The skin on his fingers and arm melted away, exposing the bone.
He stared in horror at his skeletal limb.
"Now, Jondak. You know to never touch me unless I will it. Off you go, lest I lose my temper and increase your punishment."
Suddenly he was on hanging in mid air in a firey chamber, spread eagle, his arms and legs pinned. The heat was unbearable. The demons screeched happily as they came toward him.
"NOOOOOO.....," his screams were cut off.
Shirra watched for awhile with an amused smile on her lips. When she thought he'd had enough, she would send Jondak back to his cell. He would be fine. He might have some lingering pain in his hand, but she would see to it the damage was repaired. After all, if he wasn't whole, how could he complete the tasks at hand?
It was all just an illusion. Jondak was really pinned to the wall - no fire, no demons. She was surprised an Irnaxxian would fall for such an easy trick, but it worked. She was able to supply the real thing, of course. But that would be time consuming, and Shirra was not a patient person.
He bowed low, and she made him stay in that position for several minutes before ordering him to get her some breakfast. She crossed the room to her wardrobe and selected some clothes to wear.
Jondak was such a fool. It's too bad there was no one more qualified to handle this job in that wretched prison. Oh well. He would have to do. She did possess the power to replace him, if need be. But it would take a lot of work.
First she would have to scour the planes to find just the right person. That, itself, would take days. Then she would have to have her servants collect the necessary ingredients for the series of incantations she would need to open up a portal. Over a week's worth of work and then she would have to train that person to do her bidding. More time lost. It's not that she was in a hurry, she just didn't want the hassle of finding someone new.
She got pretty lucky with Jondak. He happened to be in the right place at the right time. And the fact that he wanted Ileeya, her rotten twin sister, just made things all that much easier. Then Shirra could dangle Ileeya in front of Jondak like a carrot on a string for a mule.
Send both her and Jondak to some remote location and let Jondak have his happiness. Jondak had been faithful, after all, maybe he deserved a reward. It all depended on Shirra's mood when she appointed herself as Ruler of the Planes.
One thing was certain, however, she had no intention of giving Jondak the real thing. Ileeya would have to be eliminated, of course. There was a power in her sister, Shirra could feel it. She posed a threat to Shirra's ultimate goal.
And this human, Tim. What of him? Shirra thought it not possible Tim could be the one the old prophecy foretold about, although the idiot king and his assembly of morons seemed to think so. Just to be on the safe side, Tim should at least be incapacitated. If she couldn't sway him to do her bidding, then she would have to suck enough of his mind away that he no longer remembered who he was.
She sighed to herself. It was so much better when they cooperated. It's about time she paid him a visit.
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Tim knew he wouldn't have time to confront Ileeya about her sister, if indeed she had one, in the short mornings before they were to leave the cell. And he didn't want to broach the subject in the courtyard, either. The month of rest trickled away quickly and it was easy to lose track of time. He wanted to enjoy the bright sunshine without brining a cloud into the picture. Since Ileeya had wanted to keep this secret from him, then bringing it up and forcing the truth out of her would certainly put her in a bad mood. Better to enjoy the few hours in the hot sun before they had to retreat to their cells. The month would come to an end soon enough, and he would talk to her about it then.
Ileeya spent a large portion of her days with her female friends talking. Not wanting to feel like an intruder, Tim didn't bother her, but he did watch her a lot. He loved to watch her from a distance. She was so entrancing.
He noticed, though, often Jondak would sit in the shade of one of the few trees and just watch him watching her. He always had a scowl on his face.
It was hard to miss the romance that was blooming between Gylen and Kiara, Ileeya's closest friend. Though the two had never met before being captured, they were of the same race, and had a lot to talk about.
Tim had learned only a little about Gylen. He was usually quiet and soft spoken. He rarely gave details about his homeworld or what his life had been like, but knew a few details. Details like his people, the Dendiji, were a farming race, and spent long days in their fields culitvating their crops. Gardening here was almost like home for him, except for the family he left behind. But Tim sensed more than that. Judging by the scars on Gylen's face, there was more to him than he was willing to let on.
Sometimes, Ileeya would sit and chat with Tim. She seemed so free away from the confines of the cell. He was able to get an inkling of what it would be like to be someplace else with her.It was easy to ignore Jondak's sour face during this time. Actually, it was easy to ignore everything around them. Though they spent many hours in the courtyard, the day always seemed to slip by too fast, and the reality of the prison slammed back into him when they were taken back to their cells in the evening, after the large midday meal.
It was during one of these times Tim kissed Ileeya for the first time. They were standing and chatting about a variety of things. Discussing each other's hopes and dreams. Ileeya had just finished a game with some of her friends. They had been running in the hot sun and Ileeya's hair was plastered to her forehead. It was slightly tangled and there was a fine sheen of perspiration on her face. Her lips and cheeks were stained red from exertion and her eyes, bright and beautiful, caught the sun's light and reflected it back a thousand fold. She had never looked more lovely.
Tim felt the moment was right and pulled her to him. He hoped he made the right decision, and, when she didn't resist him, realized he had. His heart leapt for joy when she kissed him back.~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Jondak had decided to stop pursuing Ileeya for awhile. It was obvious she didn't want him. It would have been nice if she had been interested in Jondak, at least a little bit, but it had been four years. Even when he had first gotten here, he hoped. He knew he was a fair looking guy. Back in his own village he had his pick of women. And he had most of them. He didn't think Ileeya didn't want him because of his race. Elves and Irnaxxians had been interbreeding for centuries. Maybe she was racist. Of course, look who she was hanging around with. A human! What the hell is a human? Where do they even come from? No one here had ever seen or heard of one before. Jondak wondered what telepathic abilities the human had. He didn't seem to have any. He came here not even knowing how to fight. He was pretty good at it now, though, but only because Ileeya had taught him, and she was one of the best here. It's too bad Jondak hadn't been selected to be Tim's trainer. He would have made sure Tim didn't make it through the tournament.Seeing Tim with Ileeya was difficult for him. He wanted her. How dare Tim come here from some place unknown, be here for less than a year and steal her away? Seeing him kiss her made his blood boil. That should have been himself during last year's month of rest. Or even this year's. Jondak desperately wished he could march right over there, put his hands around the big lout's neck, and squeeze until the bastard stopped moving. Tim wouldn't go down without a fight, Jondak realized. He had his hopes just before the tournament that he would be easily controlled. That handshake seemed to make Tim sweat a little. But obviously not enough. He hadn't expected Tim and Ileeya to have grown so close so quickly. Jondak wasn't allowed to kill him, not yet. That would be a failure in his mission. Shirra would certainly destroy him. He shivered again at the thought. Damn Tim! Jondak would make him pay. One day.
Maybe he could get Ileeya to turn against Tim somehow through mind control. He couldn't make her fall in love with him, though. He would have to take what he wanted by force. Maybe with Shirra's help, Ileeya's mind could be weakened to the point where Jondak could implant certain messages to make her serve only him. It wouldn't be the same, but he was going to have to be happy with it.
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That night in the cell, Tim was nervous. He didn't want to ask Ileeya about her past. He wanted to know, but he knew it would upset her, and he didn't want to have to do that. Especially when the day had been so nearly perfect; considering the circumstances. But the time had come and the issue was weighing heavily on his mind. They had their meager dinner and Tim grew more apprehensive.
"Oh, uh, nothing."
"Then why do you seem so nervous?"
"Being around pretty girls does that to me".
"You're not a very good liar, are you, Tim?"
"What?!"
He turned to face her. Her clear blue eyes sparkled as they looked into his. He took a deep breath and began, "I had a dream last night that you had a sister." He watched closely for a reaction.
"How interesting," she said, looking away.
"Do you?"
"No. I already told you. I'm an only child."
He gently turned her face to him.
"Please, Ileeya. I need to know."
In her eyes, which widened, he saw several emotions play through.
"What are you so afraid of? You can trust me," he said.
She pulled away from him and paced the cell as she gathered her thoughts."Yes," she finally said. "I had a sister. Her name was Shirra. Are you happy now?"
"What happened to her?"
"Several months ago I told you I had a friend named Shirra who died in a village fire. It was my sister, not my friend."
He walked over to her. "Ileeya, I know that's not the truth."
"She...She...," her face contorted with mixed emotions. "Damn you to hell, Tim Mitchell! Why do you need to know?" She was crying, now.
It wrenched his heart to see her like this."I don't want you keeping secrets. I know you're hiding something."
"We shared one kiss, and already you're staking your claim on me? Well, I won't have it! It's not like we're married!" she screamed.
"Maybe not," he said softly as he stroked her cheek. "But I love you, Ileeya. And it hurts me to see you in so much pain. When we first met, you told me you were an excellent judge of character and that you knew I could be trusted."
She turned her tear stained up to him. "Okay, Tim," she said, "You really want the truth?"
"Yes," he answered.
" I had a twin sister," she said, "but I killed her."
17 comments:
She killed her, yeah, right!
Well, maybe she thinks she killed her, but she obviously did not. Poor thing, Ileeya...
That naughty, naughty Shirra, makign poor Jondak suffer so much. I feel so sorry for him.
Not!
Mind you, Shirra is a bitch, and I'm even more convinced now than I was before that she's behind it all.
Don't know yet what she wants, but it can't be anything good.
Just to think she's Ileeya's twin. So weird! The good and the bad twin. Almost like Eve Black and Eve White...
I love those red walls, btw. Would you mind telling us where you've got them from?
I wouldn't mind at all - but you may have to wait a little bit. My game takes forever and a day to get going (because I have so many downloads), so I don't start it up unless I'm planning on working. And I'm not sure when the next time will be. But I would be happy to check and see if there's a tooltip display to tell me where they came from.
Shirra definitely doesn't want anything good. She's quite power hungry, and will let nothing stand in the way of her goals.
The next chapter will start touching on why Ileeya and Shirra are so different as we have a happy little flashback. :)
Thanks for all the comments!
I loved how the red of Shirra's room reflected in the mirror. That was an incredibly good touch.
So Ileeya is going to tell Tim the truth. I wonder, does she think she killed Shirra or is this another lie to cover her twin's evil ways.
I enjoyed the different perspectives you gave us between Tim's feelings and then Jondak's (who I laughed out loud at when I realized the torture was all an illusion) Not as smart as he thinks is he?
It's going to be very interesting to see how these next few chapters unfold. And to get a glimpse of the twins' past should be most enlightening!
Oh I read it just so very recently, I like these chapers where the evil ones take most of the space, strenghtens the drama.
Shirra is quite talented torturing people and it seems it all will come down to Jordak, he might be very skilled at fighting and will lead to a very climatic battle but we will see of that.
It is more or less shocking to see Ileeya with all the eating the loser of the tournament on the last episode and now seeing her crying a bit, you do like to tease readers, thats nice. Although you explained the eating the loser and the blood on her mouth as part of his guilt if I remember well
Great chapter overall and I guess next one will have a lot of flashbacks
Thanks, Gayl! Creating Shirra's Evil Lair was probably one of my favorite things to do in this story. I keep trying to find excuses to shoot in there, lol.
Right around now is my favorite part of the story. From about chapters 13-18 or so, things get pretty hairy and (hopefully) interesting.
The next chapter will give some insight to Ileeya's and Shirra's past.
And yeah, Jondak used to be all that and a bag of chips back where he comes from, and thinks he has the right to be so here, as well. And he would have been, if Shirra hadn't come along and one upped him.
Thanks for your comments, lady, I appreciate them!
Pablo - I think I explained it as part guilt and part 'other stuff' which I can't really get too into at the moment.
It was fun getting into Shirra's head and thinking differently for awhile. Jondak will have some more screentime as well.
You're right about something, but I'm not going to tell you what. ;)
Thanks for your comments, Pablo. They mean a lot to me.
Sorry for my delay!! :D
I loved this chapter... I loved the different points of view... specially like Shirra, lol she is sooooooo very lazy!! Troublesome to look for someone new, then train him, she is a funny evil bitch!
Jondank, lol He fell for such a cheap trick! :D He is definitely scared or not as smart as he thought he was... lol Poor Jondank I do feel sorry for him at a times... he should just move forward and forget about Ileeya! A relationship has to be "a two way relationship" or it won't work!
I loved Shirra's room, the walls, the mirror, everything was perfect! Great set!
I was so happy to see Tim finally made a move and kissed Ileeya! Glad she returned the kiss and I really hope she will open up to him and tell him the truth!
I really doubt Shirra was killed... she looks pretty alive for me! :D lol lol...
Great job Ariana! and Shirra is a master in torturing people! :D lol
I forgot to say, how much I enjoy your writing! :D lol you already know that, but anyways...
your descriptive writing is so beautiful, entertaining and a wonderful complement for your pictures!!!
Great job
Oh, Sandy, you have no idea how much I float when you compliment my writing. I'm still kind of new at it, and don't feel like it's very strong, but I'm getting better. Most of the stuff you're reading was actually written years ago, with a few minor changes.
I feel sort of sorry for Jondak, myself. But he's deluded. He doesn't actually want a relationship, but he's extremely arrogant and spoiled, and thinks he's entitled to whatever he wants. And he's going to have to find out the hard way that he can't have it. And also that he's not as great as he thinks he is.
And yes - a kiss finally, lol! And Ileeya opens up in the next chapter - although it won't be easy for either of them when she does!
Wow! Poor Ileeya! She thinks she killed her sister. I wonder how it exactly happened. Then, how did she survive? Or did she? Is she more than she seems? What exactly is she? She seems like a dark side to Ileeya's good side. I am very interested in learning more about their past.
One thing's for sure, that Shirra is one evil bent lady!
That was so sweet how Tim finally got to kiss Ileeya. She's starting to really open up to him now. Jondak can just eat his jealousy and choke on it! Ha!
Great chapter!
LOL! Yes, Jondak is quite jealous.
Shirra is most definitely thorougly evil. You haven't seen the half of it yet!
And the next chapter will give you some of the answers you want (but not all).
I'm very happy you're reading and enjoying!
Hi Ariana! Here I am at last! took the last week off from writing/sims to recharge my batteries, I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the deeper glance in Jondak's character, I even felt a little sorry for his dilemma. You are right, he does come across as a bit spoiled, but I have a soft spot for guys with issues! LOL!
Shirra is quite the she-devil, what a villain!
Your sets and pictures are wonderful! Such a fantasy-feel to it!
How sweet the kiss between Tim and Ileeya, and you left it off at a great spot! I wonder if she really killed her sister, or if the twisted Shirra has let he believe she did, can't wait for her narrative next chapter! Flashbacks rock!
Great job Ariana, I am thoroughly engrossed in your story, so many interesting characters and layers, truly, this is one of my favs!
Cheers mate!
~~Karen
Thank you so much, Karen! I'm quite honored to receive such lovely comments. One of your favorites, really? You have no idea how good that makes me feel, as I've admired your work for quite some time.
I have mixed feelings for Jondak. I mean, yeah he knows what he wants, but he's too greedy when he sees that it's just not working out. Then someone comes along who has more power, and is bigger and badder than he is, and he flops from being the bad guy to the puppet. Poor guy, lol. He wanted to be the bad guy of this story!
Thanks so much for reading, Karen.
Oh they kissed! Finally! It was so sweet - and maybe things will become a little bearable now for Tim.
So Illeya thinks that she killed Shirra? Well, she will be in for a surprise when they meet again then.
Oh will she ever ;)
Thanks for reading.
OOOOOO! WOW! The picture of their 'First Kiss' was freaking GORGEOUS! Love the glow surrounding them, and Jondak's furious form in the background!
Girl, this is getting more interesting by the minute, and I don't have to wait for next chapter, got a lot of awesome chapters to go! :rah: :rah: ;)
Thank you, Zayury! I did it all by myself! :)
You're just plowing right through this story, aren't you, lol?
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